Help asked

thanks guys I will do my best to add all of it to my posts

Agreed with what was said. Also... be your character. Pretend you are him or her and let the thoughts and emotions run through you. Not everyone is good at this, but it's a good skill to have/ kind of develop for empathy in general. It's a bit like acting, thinking in one point of view. I hate acting, but roleplaying is fine, since it's just typing and not speaking and memorizing lines. ^_^ This is why on some occasions, some of us pull characters out for seemingly no reason or not post a character much even if we're online.

I agree with Fossy. Those little details help describe the surrounding environment

Inward thoughts, emotions, and ideas are great too. These can be about the past, present, and future.

I find details make all the difference Jaredrion. Sight, Sound, touch, taste, and scent. Describing words...describing actions...describing your surroundings. All those little details add up in a post. Having an online thesaurus on hand helps as well...say if you want to find a different word for...Hot... Scalding, Burning, Crispy....ect ect...all good words to replace it with. I hope this helps a little

~Fossy

Hi to all, like you guys know me, that most of my posts might give a rushed feeling while you read them,
because im not so good in describing or anything else to make the post easier to read I hereby ask for tips about how i can change my post style, to make them feel less rushed and easier to read

already thx from Jaredrion